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Your submission at Articles for creation: Sharafadeen Alli (May 10)
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:
The comment the reviewer left was:
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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- Hello. Thanks for the review. I summarized the information provided by credible and independent secondary sources. It is my understanding that the article in question adheres to Wikipedia's notability standards and that the sources utilized are of a reliable and trustworthy nature. I genuinely appreciate your support in this matter. I anticipate a re-review of my draft. Allisay (talk) 08:56, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Allisay, I didn't decline it for notability reasons, I declined it as it was written like an advert and doesn't comply to our WP:NPOV policy. Please re-write and re-submit. Qcne (talk) 10:30, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- The article was not written as an advertisement. It follows every other type of political content. If I may ask, why did you think: it was written as an advertisement? Allisay (talk) 13:01, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- Three promotional sentences:
- - "to the renowned Olofiere Family"
- - "where he bagged a Bachelor of Law Degree"
- - "Demonstrating his entrepreneurial spirit"
- Source #1 sharafadeenalli.com source is obviously not independent and I am not clear what it is citing? His name? I would use it for his date of birth instead.
- I don't understand what source #3 is for.
- Source #4 and #6 are terrible sources, just total promotion. Qcne (talk) 13:10, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- The article was not written as an advertisement. It follows every other type of political content. If I may ask, why did you think: it was written as an advertisement? Allisay (talk) 13:01, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Allisay, I didn't decline it for notability reasons, I declined it as it was written like an advert and doesn't comply to our WP:NPOV policy. Please re-write and re-submit. Qcne (talk) 10:30, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Allisay!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Qcne (talk) 11:14, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
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