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Jack Black

• There are inconsistent subheadings (one section has subheadings while all the rest do not).
• There are several copyediting/grammar errors throughout
• There is a need for improved citations

Christmas in Russia

• There are no sections for important themes like ‘history’ or ‘celebrations.’
• There doesn’t seem to be a main focus, and there aren’t any subheadings.
• Copyediting is needed, especially in the introduction.

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