Talk:University of Houston–Victoria/Archive 1

Archive 1

New editor

Hello, In an effort to remain transparent and not concel any conflict of interest, I would like to disclose that I am an editor working on behalf of University of Houston-Victoria. If there is anything you would like to discuss, feel free to contact me on talk page or email me at cookek@uhv.edu. CommSpecialist (talk) 18:15, 21 March 2011 (UTC)

I applaud your transparentness. Some of the content here reads like an advertisement and is not neutral. Examples include: "Taking a nursing career to the next level can be achieved at the UHV School of Nursing", "The school equips its graduates to lead other nurses, manage departments and facilities, and teach the next generation of nurses.",

"UHV strives to keep a low student-to-faculty ratio to allow faculty to give more personal attention.",

"Faculty members are as global as the perspectives they bring to the classroom",

"...where students can make lifelong friends, form cherished memories and enjoy the benefits of a supportive college environment."

Please revise the content so it has a neutral viewpoint

--Jogjayr (talk) 01:20, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

New editor

Hello, In an effort to remain transparent and not concel any conflict of interest, I would like to disclose that I am an editor working on behalf of University of Houston-Victoria. If there is anything you would like to discuss, feel free to contact me on talk page or email me at cookek@uhv.edu. CommSpecialist (talk) 18:15, 21 March 2011 (UTC)

I applaud your transparentness. Some of the content here reads like an advertisement and is not neutral. Examples include: "Taking a nursing career to the next level can be achieved at the UHV School of Nursing", "The school equips its graduates to lead other nurses, manage departments and facilities, and teach the next generation of nurses.",

"UHV strives to keep a low student-to-faculty ratio to allow faculty to give more personal attention.",

"Faculty members are as global as the perspectives they bring to the classroom",

"...where students can make lifelong friends, form cherished memories and enjoy the benefits of a supportive college environment."

Please revise the content so it has a neutral viewpoint

--Jogjayr (talk) 01:20, 28 March 2012 (UTC)