Talk:Mountain Meadows Massacre and Mormon public relations

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Poorly constructed sentence

Please clarify 'who what where when etc' in the following sentence:

Leonard is one of the co-authors of the book the LDS Church is writing about the massacre.

Right now the sentence fails to answer

--Ancheta Wis (talk) 15:34, 10 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]