Talk:Frédérik Gauthier

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 07:40, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:40, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

Haven't taken an actual look yet, but...

• You need a longer lead about his Leafs career. Done
• Montreal Canadians  Done

 Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:32, 3 May 2020 (UTC)

• Ref 3 is dead.  Done
• Canadian football and Harvard Crimson men's ice hockey might be good links. Done
• Refs 5, 12, 37, and 44 have authors.
  • Where? "THW ARCHIVES" stands for The Hockey News Archives
    • Only 6 and 38 left. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)  Done
• "received a final ranking of eighth amongst North American skaters from the NHL Central Scouting Bureau" Not verifiable via ref 10.
  • It's cited to ref 11
    • Well now it's 11. I think you added a ref earlier, so everything moved down by 1. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
• Are there better mock drafts (from better sources) than those two sites? Done
• Make sure authors' names are formatted consistently, such as ref 20.
  • No author for ref 20
    • Got moved down to ref 21. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)  Done
• "Maple Leafs Training Camp" Maple Leafs' training camp? Done
• No box score/summary of the Marlies-Phantoms game from the Marlies' website? Done
• "However" WP:EDITORIAL.  Done
• "He recovered in time to make his post-season debut with the Leafs, playing in all seven games during the first round against the Boston Bruins.""  Done.
• I feel like there is more to the 2019-20 season, at least more than two sentences. Done
• "failed to medal" Mention they lost to Russia. Done
• Reference column needs a name. Done

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)