Talk:Cutis marmorata telangiectatica congenita

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User:Tattycakes per you email have indicated ICD per [1]--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 14:22, 12 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I find this article to be weirdly written and have several problems

I'll collect them as separate comments/topics here, but looking at the edit history there will probably become an edit war if any of the things are changed 178.174.193.250 (talk) 06:46, 30 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

First problem: "For a full and up-to-date description visit the CMTC webpages [...]". Why? Is the definition updated every 5 minutes or why would it be so hard just using the site as a reference instead? 178.174.193.250 (talk) 06:48, 30 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
related: Is there *really* no .com or .co.uk or .org site that is equally good? Why a Netherlands domain? And why the insistance to make it a part of the main text? 178.174.193.250 (talk) 06:51, 30 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Second problem: why have a genetics chart AND a cause section that says that "cases appear sporadically" and "Hypothesises include". Either we know that it's genetic (with possible mutations as a cause), or the cause it's unknown or unconfirmed (and it that case the image should br removed) 178.174.193.250 (talk) 06:55, 30 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Third problem: "People with visible marks generally feel fine (physically) and can act normally, but when it is mentioned, they may become withdrawn and self-conscious."
wow, what a delightfully unhelpful way to describe "yeah it can be hard to look different sometimes" and try to make a completely normal reaction sound like a symptom 178.174.193.250 (talk) 06:57, 30 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]