Talk:Ciutat Morta
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Ciutat Morta has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: March 21, 2021. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Ciutat Morta/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review so far, the article is improved for it. I've answered everything with some queries, see what you think. Mujinga (talk) 11:51, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
- re "expanding #Production to meet the third criteria" I added some lines yesterday and I've added some more today from the last review I found. I've also put in the academic analysis that was previously in further reading. I don't think this film will ever have a production section the size of say Blade Runner 2049, I'm happy the main aspects are covered. Back to you, thanks! Mujinga (talk) 11:38, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review so far, the article is improved for it. I've answered everything with some queries, see what you think. Mujinga (talk) 11:51, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
- Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
- "Poster" → "Promotional release poster"
- Don't use "<br />" in the infobox. Use "plainlist" instead.
- In the lead, remove the comma after "until 2015".
- I've read it a few times, I prefer it with the comma. Could rephrase if it's a big issue. Might be a British English / US English thing? Mujinga (talk) 10:02, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
- The issue was that the sentence is kinda short, so a comma wasn't necessary.
Plot
- This section is over 400 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
- Remove the comma after "hit on the head".
- Add a comma after the first naming of Rodrigo Lanza.
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- I see your point; it was an Oxford comma thing.
- Remove the comma after "Alfredo Pestana".
- Add a comma after "they looked".
- "son of diplomat" → "son of a diplomat"
Themes
- Add a comma after "gentrification".
- don't see the need for it, we must have different comma styles Mujinga (talk) 10:10, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, it was another Oxford comma thing.
- Other than that, this section looks good.
Production
- "seven-storey" → "seven-story"
- Add a comma after "Guàrdia Urbana".
- "decide" → "decided"
- This section is extremely short, so try expanding it.
Release
- Add a comma after "June 8, 2013".
- "action" → "act"
- "department" → "Department"
Critical response
- The word "onesidedness" doesn't sound right, so maybe reword it?
- Add more reviews (if possible).
Legacy
- Remove the comma after "Guàrdia Urbana".
- Add a comma after "Cs, PP".
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