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"Eilish explains her degeneracies" → "with Eilish explaining that her degeneracies"
"climate change. 'Man is such a fool, why are we saving him?'"." → "climate change", noting that she quips: "Man is such a fool, why are we saving him?""
Critical reception
"has received mainly positive reviews from music critics." → "has been met with mainly positive reviews from music critics."
"one of the albums essential tracks" → "one of the essential tracks on When We All Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go?"
"Roisin O'Connor in his review for The Independent had negative thoughts for the albums first four track," → "Roisin O'Connor, in his review for The Independent, had negative thoughts for the album's first four tracks,"
"kind of momentum."" → "kind of momentum"."
"descroibed the songs title as" → "described the song's title as"
"but comments that the song is" → "while commenting that the song is"
"and melody" and you’re left" → "and melody", leaving you"
"it never happens."" → "it never happens"."
Commercial performance
"and number 15 on the" → "and number 15 on the US"
"which denotes track-equivalent sales of 1,000,00 units based on sales and streams." → "denoting track-equivalent sales of 1,000,000 units in the US based on sales and streams."
Move Canada sentence to starting the second para
"at number 19 and was certified" → "at number 19, and it was certified"
"by Music Canada MC for shipments of over 80,000 copies in the country." → "by Music Canada (MC) for shipments of over 80,000 copies in Canada."
"was later was certified silver" → "was later certified silver"
"for selling over 200,000 units." → "for selling over 200,000 units in the United Kingdom."
"within the top 5" → "within the top five"
"peaking at the top of the chart." → "peaking at number one in the country."
"was ultimately certified gold in New Zealand by the" → "was ultimately certified gold by"
"15,000 copies in the country." → "15,000 copies in New Zealand."
"left off.[55] It opens with a shot of Eilish's back being stabbed by syringes" → "left off, opening with a shot of syringes being used to stab Eilish's back" and move [55] to the end of the sentence before [56]
"she falls down from" → "Eilish falls down from"
"her white wings and eyes start filling" → "with her white wings and eyes starting to fill"
"She tries to" → "Eilish tries to"
"but has a hard time." → "but struggles to do so."
"Eilish barely manages" → "She barely manages"
"her entire body and white wings are" → "with her entire body and white wings being"
"continues walk down" → "continues to walk down"
"starts to catch on fire." → "begins to catch fire."
"through the road and" → "down the road and"
"turns around, her wings" → "turns around; her wings"
Critical reception
Retitle to Reception since it mentions the awards
"saying it" → "said it"
"we've laid eyes."" → "we've laid eyes"."
Remove wikilink on MTV
"viewed thed video as" → "viewed the video as"
""dark" and" → ""dark", and"
"was "more than just a music video."" → "is "more than just a music video"."
"stated that the video was" → "wrote that the visual is"
"while praising it" → "while praising the music video"
"for Best Cinematography, Best Visual Affects, and Video For Good." → "for the awards of Best Cinematography, Best Visual Affects, and Video For Good." with the targets
Live performances and other use
Retitle to Live performances and usage in media
""All the Good Girls Go to Hell" was included on" → "The song was included on"
"Eilish and Finneas further performed" → "Eilish and Finneas performed"
"on November 24, 2019, making it her first ever" → "on November 24, making her first"
"switched to bass guitar, as" → "switched to playing bass guitar as" with the wikilink
"around the stage against" → "around the stage, against"
"ends, the teenager stares into the camera and sticks" → "ended, Eilish stared into the camera and stuck"
Add a fullstop after the album's title, even though there is a question mark; this is not a grammatical mistake since that's the title of the album --K. Peake 08:39, 24 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Cite Tophit as the publisher for ref 93 with the wikilink
External links
Good
Final comments and verdict
On hold after reviewing over the course of today, faster than I expected but I'll give you time to fix the issues still! --K. Peake 16:56, 23 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The Ultimate Boss I did move the credits and personnel sub-section since you forgot about that, but everything else looks fine. ✓Pass now, glad to do so as I love this song! --K. Peake 16:34, 25 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]